Lonely she

by sarah   Aug 26, 2007


She said i'll try
but actually all she did was cry
she never showed how she felt
everything deep inside she kept
she wishes she could reduce the speed of pain
but at the end there was nothing she could gain
No one was ever their for her
how could they simply not care
they alwas claimed it was her fault
but why? that she is still trying to figure out.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Pain is just another thing we sacrifice in order to live in our world. But life is a beautiful thing, and you shouldn't hide it. Don't bottle up those feelings. Let it out. Let everything you love, you hate, you simpathize, you believe in, let it all out in something. Be strong, be your own light. So when someone saves you, you can save them too.

    deep poem, makes me think.

    And I always like poems that make me think.

    Keep writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kevin

    Your poem is amazing

    kevin x

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

    Nazeer

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