Death Nears

by lish   Aug 30, 2007


I'm left out here alone
with no-one else who cares
as people walk past me
i receive a million stares

my wrists are bleeding
my heart is dying
i sit here on the curve
just crying and crying

i start to feel faint
as the air disappears
i sit here crying
knowing its death that nears

he crushed my heart
so I'm taking my life
all that i used
was a simple kitchen knife

* i wrote this in school so ill edit it later*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Is curve: supposed to be curb?

    a little bit more puncuation is needed but maybe thats just my way of thinking.

    its simple, and its pretty good, especially since it was wrote in school, i know i used to write an awful lot of my earlier poetry in school.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Well done, its was a short but it was really awesome..^^5/5 for it

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    So sad, the minute a read this i came up with the perfect melody, this would be a very very very emotional song 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem with great flow, keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Nice poem. Very said. I loved the emotion in it. The structure was really good too and the flow was amazing. I don't think you need to edit it. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

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