Welcome to my life

by Veamm   Aug 31, 2007


Welcome to my life

Look at me, tell me how to smile
I'm depressed and unsatisfied
all i know is having a boring life
i even don't know whats on my mind
all i can do is to sit and waste time
expecting that something will come
hoping that changes will delve around

i had enough and i can't take any longer
i know its killing me at a snail's pace
everyday, bit by bit it makes me weak
I'm trapped, myself locked in a cage
were i can't find myself that i left
is this the life that i wanted to live?
or its just the part of me that i deceive

my dreams that i dream is all dump
I'm tasteless and i lost my verve
the spot, the goal that i fantasize
was not suppose to make me free
but it made me turn back to reality
this face will forever be incomplete
because my life is like a s###t

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  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    Your poems are beautiful even though i dont understand what they're trying to say i understand that they are a feeling that you're feeling and that makes them worth reading and that makes them as beautiful as they are another great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I like the conviction of your write and the feeling behind it, a few grammatical changes would help it flow better. good job otherwise.

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Fantatic i love the emotion..5/5 ^_^ pinoy rocks

  • 16 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    It flowed wonderfully. Even though it didn't rhyme and the wording wasn't that great but something about it just really stood out for me. I guess it's just that alot of us can relate to this.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a good poem... i feel the same ways sometimes... like right now.. i feel like my life is useless..but i know that something better will come by sooner or later.. just keep your head up and have hope.

    the poem flowed nicely.5/5 from me.

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