My Hit Man

by Angie   Sep 1, 2007


My Hit Man

dressed in a dark suit
gray shirt and black tie
a gold chain hangs around your neck
sunglasses hide your eyes

freshly shaven
hair slicked back
not a smile
did you crack

looking all hot and sexy
you I wanted to attack
off to make one final confession
before the next man you whack

**Michael was off to film another movie this morning called "Gods Gift, Devils Curse" he plays a hit man who makes a final confession. He looked so hot all dressed up that I just had to write about it**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Charming

    Lol Ilike how you took time to express such a small moment of deep emotion I love it.

    PrinceCharming,

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is just great, Willow! So simple, yet perfectly written. It really is amazing what can inspire a poem, huh? I bet Michael just loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Oh snap!! There he goes dressin' up for someone else!! LOL Seriously though, I believe you captured the moment perfectly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Oh quite a sexy piece you have written here =p. I really did enjoy this you painted an amazing picture in mind of exactly what the outfit looked like. This poem was unique I must say I havn't read a poem on a hit man before but the title definitly caught my interest as did the whole poem. Overall everything was brilliant. loved it keep up the good work ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very original and interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it. You created great atmosphere, and you expressed emotions uniquely. Well done! 5/5

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