Black Death

First of how imaginative was

Poison tainted clouds cover the sky

wow, what a sentence, really really exellent. The thoughts and feeling that appeared throughout were really shown by the language you used really good job xxx alex xxx

I liked the retorical question you added intho this piece, I also liked how you ended up answering therefor not making it so retorical but actually made sense of it. This was also another truthful piece by you, your work is really honest and shows so much emotions written in depth. Word choice again really effective. Well done. Loved this one alot. ~Mel

The way you put your words together is good it got better and better with each and every line 5/5

I love the way that you put your words together... I liked the end allot.. one again there is nothign that i can say bad

once again 5/5

We have all been guilty of being selfish a time, two, and even three in our lives. It is human nature and one that we will not be able to be rid of any time soon.

This was good and seemed to scream a hint of truth to everyone that reads it.

--Sher