You're like

by the come back   Sep 4, 2007


You're like candy,
That sweetens my day
You're like a movie,
That I watch everyday

You're like walls,
That blocks my hall
You're like an apple,
That makes my eyes fall

You're like an onion,
That makes me cry
You're like a butterfly,
That makes me feel high

You're like a dream,
That I cant wake
And you're like a love,
But I cant take

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Good poem
    5/5
    well done bro
    keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    The first stanza has the words [[one ending in day]] as a rhyme. I didn't like that too well.

    "You're like an onion,
    That makes me cry"
    ^^ I thought those two lines were adorable.

    And, overall this entire poem was adorable. I actually loved it. Lol. It's quite good. (:

    Keep it up darling.

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I thought this piece was really cute and some of the comparisons I found quite amusing. Interesting and different take on the whole relationship genre.

  • 18 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I like the food talk, but seriously, nice format, good job

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 18 years ago

    by Woe

    This is cute & sweet. i like it. <3 5/5

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