Wow!!!!!..it's nice that you are in mood write now to write poems.......unlike me....*cries*.....but anyway..great poem

Very beautiful and emotional. I like the descriptions in the whole piece.
My favorite stanza is:
-You're like candy,
That sweetens my day
You're like movie,
That I watch everyday-

The last two lines in the last stanza are a little bit confusing, but the rest of the poem is very good.

You made my day.....you made me into better thoughts by providing lovely writings...

luz and naz

Really good. 5/5 =]]

amandaxx.

A well written piece there were a couple of sentences such as "You're like movie" could be "Your like a movie" and so on but except for this it was a good piece.

Woah, that was a really well flowing fantabulous poem keep it up 5/5

Wow...I really loved this one =) Very sweet, heart felt and loving but it also shows some of the other sides to love in a beautiful way =) A perfect 5 in every way =D
Rhea

Ok.. my brain is working on this, yeah u made it really different from the usual poem coz of the desciption. but honestly it doesn't caught my interest on this.. though i know it's so sweet and kindda unique (due to the good imagintaion and description or wordings ) maybe because i don't like reading such style (repition) i mean it sounds like a cliche to me... hope that doesn't offend u

Again the rhyming was a little off you could have found another word that rhymed with day like they,say,may,okay,lay etc. but still another good poem

I mean right now to write

A good poem, i liked the idea of comparing the person to different things, it worked well, the flow was okay and you did a good job
with love, Tara-Kay
x

It was wonderfully written. you can see that this piece cam straight from your heart, i think a lot of people could relate to this 5/5

Unique poem and I enjoyed reading your poem. It sounds good and the word choice can still be improved I would say and you have the caliber:-)

tc
Fsams

Aww.. This poem is absolutely fantastic! I love it. Great job! 5/5 I added it to my fav poems :) I just can't find the right words to describe what I think about this poem it's so amazing. Seriously! Keep up the wonderful job!

Take care

This is cute & sweet. i like it. <3 5/5

I like the food talk, but seriously, nice format, good job

your servant:
atticus

I thought this piece was really cute and some of the comparisons I found quite amusing. Interesting and different take on the whole relationship genre.

The first stanza has the words [[one ending in day]] as a rhyme. I didn't like that too well.

"You're like an onion,
That makes me cry"
^^ I thought those two lines were adorable.

And, overall this entire poem was adorable. I actually loved it. Lol. It's quite good. (:

Keep it up darling.

Good poem
5/5
well done bro
keep writing