Wiskey drowns

by ben thompson   Sep 5, 2007


Traveler of a well worn path with bad decisions abound.
Whiskey never helped although I drank enough to drown.

Searching for a savior praying down on bended knee.
Sly serpent's fallacious salvation was a bottle of Jim beam.

Ragged and disheveled stumbling down a crowded walk.
Ashamed of myself I look away as the self righteous gawk.

Job and family a distant memory no one to hear my pleas.
Crying alone in my card board box picking off rogue fleas.

Days of youth and promise forgotten from a time long ago.
Twenty years later paints a picture of a failure on skid row.

Lord if given another chance I'd surely make things right.
Instead I'm another sad example of how alcohol ruins a life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Words of Wisdom for all to hear, also a very well written Poem.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Amazing..left me speechless
    ur really telnted
    keep it up
    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    "Days of youth and promise forgotten from a time long ago." i really like this line a lot, you did a really nice job on this piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a great piece portraying the evils of alcohol and how it destroys.
    Excellent imagery.
    Take Care Cindy

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