That night

by Veamm   Sep 6, 2007


That night

I wave my pen in circles
my papers were torn apart
ideas spilled out right
so my hands to their part

the beginning is sweet
the ending is weird
its about two hours now
more emotions i need

at last my head operates
my hands enjoyed it
and drawn my thoughts
have more to lead

im done, smile in my face
tired but so satisfied
i decided to have a rest
to relax my baffled mind

i had little dream
looking up to high
staring on the sun
moon have a shine

then i recognize
cotton cloud pillows
all over my back
and i feel dosed

my body collapse
my eyes shut tight
then i know now
i fall asleep that night

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was awesome. i loved it, nice work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Wow well done
    i love it
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    I was sort of confused about this poem, its a lot different than any ive read before and it was hard for me to understand exactly what was going on, im not saying it was a bad poem, maybe it was just a poem for a more sophisticated mind

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This one is good. Just correct 'papers were'. Its very poetic n well written. KEEP IT UP

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I had to read this poem a few times, but that is what I like. The fact that I can sit here a read something over and over again to get a new thought... perceptive.. it is just great.

    This is one of those that no matter who it is or how many times it is read there will always be something different to take from it.

    --Sher

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