Juxtapose

by Veamm   Sep 9, 2007


Juxtapose

A disguise of perfection
from body to the soul
giving much imitations
on the eyes of fools

look, mirror reflection
it can make you believe
same as the old fictions
that made youths naive

the idyllic illusions
so tricked our senses
spilled our emotions
spit on our presence

the conjure imagination
copied numb feelings
conquering our visions
as well as our dreams

*juxtapose means to make clones*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    I've never seen this subject written about before 5/5 Fantastic

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I really like this one. It made me think, which is always a good thing. I loved the metaphors you used..and how you talked about a copy being not even near the real thing and how it just ruins original beauty. At least thats what I gathered from it. Its always great to be able to give your own interpretation to someones poem. Good flow as well! Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Hey a very well penned indeed.. you brought up your own style and uniqueness. but to be honest with you, i'm trying to dig my head because i'm kindda confused. what's the relation of making clones (juxtapose, as u call it) with the meaning of this piece? or maybe i misunderstood the hidden meaning and viewed it in a different perspective? but anyway, i love the wordings and so as the imagination on this piece...keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    "look, mirror reflection,
    it can make you believe,
    same as the old fictions,
    that made youths naive,"

    AMAZING.... The word choice was amazing and I think that you have written a great piece... I cant think of anythign bad to say

    keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    I liked this one too, its quite random, but its got meaning. i love your use of vocab =]
    keep it up! 5/5
    mezmeryz

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