Forget regret

by NyellMoonlight   Sep 10, 2007


Shield me with all twisted moments,
lets drink blood from the silver chalices
as all stoned gargoyles ridicule our silhouettes
over castles of the motionless ancient worlds.

Forget regret, as the sun sets beyond purple horizon;
my soul's a temple, filled with your emerald aura.
Porcelain chambers echo distant screams
as we run into unknown, guided by descants.

Hush, my darling, let the silence sing;
Feel the pulse of this substance like your own,
embrace little imperfections of darkness,
let them be your shadow, your other skin.

Forget regret, captured by antique visions,
your demonic presence mantles my naked being.
Earthquake announces cleavage of reality
as we stand united, gracefully melting in the rain.

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  • Wow, wow, wow, last stanza is incredible... You express things amazingly with superb choice of words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    That was amazing, one of the best dark poem I have read in a while, well done. I really LOVE your choice of words. the flow was flawless, good job.

    You deserve a 5/5!
    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I loved the vocab here and the way you used them was perfect. The poem is very dark and beautifuly penned. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very well done. What stands out for me in the piece is the sound of the words themselves. They sing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautifully written...i love the imagery you created in this, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader. flow is perfect throughout the piece and i thought the ending was perfect. elegantly written.