Peace And Love.

by Roxy   Sep 12, 2007


Manipulating other peoples minds,
Scarcley wanting to look behind.
Haunted by the ghosts of our past,
Choking us with the words we said last.

Save me from demons controlling my mind,
Going around in circles,I must be blind.
Help me reach up to the aphotic velvet skies,
God,Please do stretch down and take away the lies.

Take me away,Somewhere I can be accepted.
The world today everyone is being rejected.
Hell itself can not compare to this,
Life is fading away there seem to be no bliss.

The screams of humans,scattering around.
You look everywhere,Yet no love to be found.
Just walk two steps around a street corner,
Another never-ending war,This will never be over.

Physical or mental pain,There both the same.
Why can't we seem to stop causing eachother pain?
Life is so short and it's a gift sent from above,
Be thankful for what you have,Make Peace and Love..

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This is a poem about War, and all I really want to do is get the point across that Why can't we all exept eachother for who we are? Everyday people sacrifice themselves for their country....but is it going to change anything? Yes, they may have faght for their contry....but nothing has changed has it? xxx Thank you!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wriath

    Thats awesum. U definantely deserve a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I agree totally with you...well done once again 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww really strong message. It's horribole that it all has to go on, but worse is that people just doesn't understand or care about other people who have home and people that care about them. I really like the you brought up that. very very sad and also you have an amazing imagery in here that captures readers mind.
    Flawless.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    'make piece and love '

    ='] .. wowie :D .. a superb poem with a superb message put superbly accross,,
    amazingly expressed and a damn good write..

    love your work.

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

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    Woot :D

    my fav. lines "Not Finished LoL" ..such brilliant imagery.. aah.. a marvelous write ,aye XD

    no..seriusly , like the 1st stanza ..waiting to see how it ends up :D
    i knw u'll do good...u always do :D

    ~Wake~