Tell Me I'm Alright

by Independence Forever   Sep 13, 2007


I feel so fruitless in this worry tossed world
where hate, war, and misery are swirled

am i a good man? oh please tell me
i cannot look in the mirror, can't see

can you help me, i feel cold and alone in this corner
is there anybody with faith in me? or just a mourner?

hold me tightly, tell me it's alright
it's so dark, nothing good is insight

I'm scared of the future, what i have become

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    short and to the point
    i like it
    and i felt your emotion
    it was wonderful
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Very good. I gave you 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW very nice and well written poem, sad to think of things like that , yet so true that they all seem to be so real ,,, great job, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Really nicely written...good write!

    Brooke<3