Move forward

by Veamm   Sep 14, 2007


Move forward

Face the dilemmas
make love and peace
struggles of life
the wall of worries

open your mind
clear your voice
look for something
pick a good choice

forget about mistakes
of errors and strifes
learn how to smile
survive for life

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This was BRILLIANT! I totally loved this. It is very inspiring and inspirational. Again, you did a great job writing. You have amazing talent. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    GREAT STYLE GREAT MESSAGE

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    This one I liked a whole lot better. It flowed great and really made a lot of sense. In so little words you made your point and really stuck it to the reader. Great job! 5.5
    Ciao

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I like this one very much, i like the way you explained life, and the strucutre of the poem is good and it has a natural flow , and the rhyming never seemed forced

    "Face the dilemmas
    make love and peace
    struggles of life
    the wall of worries"

    favortie stanza ^^

    a well deserved 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow real things about life
    You explained them so smoothly
    Keep it up,
    Laura

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