Ghost Dancer

by RainbowSlider   Sep 17, 2007


I danced again with your ghost tonight.
Your cold body lying in the open light.
Hearing an old familiar tune did me in.
But you weren't the ghost my friend.
It was just mind capturing you again.
We tried to dance but I wasn't good.
One of many things you understood.
Just a memory that used to hurt bad.
For a moment it made me really sad.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    It was sad in some wicked kind of joyous way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    This poem is very deep, i can feel the emotion from it, and the flow tis perfect, i give it a 5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    There is something so simply heartfelt and raw about this. It is stingingly beautiful. Fluid, and emotive. A pleasure to read.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good x

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