Gone

by Lisa   Sep 22, 2007


Frightened girl,
fragile and weary.
How will she go on?

Body moves freely,
soul motionless.
Can't they see she's gone?

What once was bright now is dark.
Her soul she can not find.
Perfect on the outside,
but is everyone so blind.

Frightened girl,
fragile and weary,
No longer can go on.

Soul free now,
Body motionless.
At last they see she's gone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Filled with sadness and nicely written, with interesting topic. You expressed emotions greatly. the ending stanza is very good conclusion to the whole piece.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Loved it!
    and my favorite part was the repeating stanzas
    great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "Soul free now
    Body motionless
    At last they see she's gone "
    ^^ I LOVE THAT STANZA.

    I love this poem all together.
    It's amazingly great.
    I think the first sad one that's not a love poem that I've read from you.

    Keep up the amazing work, dear.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I liked this, but at the same time it didn`t do a lot for me. The repetition helped, but a little more description into this would really help as well. I did like it, though.

    5.5
    :]

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