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by Cooper   Sep 23, 2007


"And I look for the resurrection of the dead, and the life of the world to come. Amen."

As the skies that are my skin
- made of soft, fragile velvet roses -
wither into dancing bouquets of dust,
I feel my lips caress the edges of a tombstone;
a concrete tapestry depicting loneliness.

Silent words fallen out of tune
- bloodred stars dripping from my mouth -
and these words echo upon stale clouds.
My breath now nothing but an orchestra of crisp leaves,
that shatter as mirrors by the most loving touch.
And I weep so well that I do not sleep,
for I cradle with sheets made of fireflies curled upto my chin.

A heart, rough like bark;
an oak organ pulsating with misery.
And as the winter of death falls like the hands of pure night,
pieces of my face decay and fade;
vanishing memories
and theatrical versions of bedtime stories that once made me cry,
as I held onto the fragments of a mother I can not love.

Terror creeps along my bones as snakes,
- frigid strands of serpentine ice -
had slithered from the crevaces of my closet,
and wrapped me in their emotionless tongues.
So I drift upon tornadoes of broken glass,
long dormant tears dripping from long lost love,
pestering me with vivid scars,
that continue to fill my grave with sorrows.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    You expressed very well. Great diction.

    [5.5]
    Keep writing!

    SARAH

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    You are a fine and inspired poetic Soul...much of your work is so sad and beautiful and painful that it brings tiny tears to me...

    My wish is that when you actually are 'old', you will still have your passionate relationship to poetic phrasing, but that your expression will embody the vision of Spiritual welcome....of infused Light rather than diffused darkness....

    Thank you most sincerely for your kind remarks..

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You have great metaphors in the whole piece, very deep, and you expressed your emotions excellently through unusual and vivid images.
    My favorite lines are:

    -Silent words fallen out of tune
    - bloodred stars dripping from my mouth -
    and these words echo upon stale clouds.
    My breath now nothing but an orchestra of crisp leaves,
    that shatter as mirrors by the most loving touch.-

    Whole piece is very powerful.
    5/5 from me