My Comfort Zone

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Sep 26, 2007


Whispers tickle my ears,
Sweet songs lullaby me to sleep,
The warmth of a voice
Wraps me in blankets,
As I lay my head to rest.

A gentle breeze
Through my window,
Lifts my spirits,
And places them in Serenity.

My mind drifts
As images flow,
I wander into thoughts,
Only writer’s belong.

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My friend suggested I wrote a poem instead of a paragraph for a quickie assignment in English. I was totally stumped on what to write, so after several starts I ended with this. I'm not totally satisfied with this, but he did not allow me to touch the poem once I finished. Now, honestly, how is it? Be BRUTAL!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Very very nice, good job good job good job 5/5 wonderfull

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked this piece. To me it was beautiful. Your friend suggested something because they knew you would write a gorgeous poem and that you did. I loved the flow it was smoothe and I loved the meaning which you have written about. Really deep. This was a great read I enjoyed every line of it and didn't get bored what so ever. If I could be brutal I would be but I find nothing wrong with this poem except it's 4.5 rating. Deserves a 5/5 in my eyes. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by 4eversum1

    I think ur friend was right. its really beautiful! pefect 5

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