My mermaid

by waiting 4 some1   Oct 5, 2007


I was given an important duty
To tell people about your beauty
So I sat alone like I usually do
To think of poem and write about you
But it's hard to write how gorgeous you are
It's hard to explain how sweet and lovely you are
Your beauty can not be described by normal words
It can only be seen in the real world
So I decided to put a note instead of a poem
I posted it in a mall and went back home
It said:
If you want to see a real princess like in our dreams
If you want to see a beautiful mermaid like in cartoons
If you want to know what beauty really means
Then come nearby my house at 8 A.M

People gather from everywhere
They keep coming from far away
At the promised time, a lady went out from the house
people were shocked and started to complain "he tricked us"
"'She is not a beautiful girl but an old lady"
So I shouted "hey watch your mouth, she is my mom"
She is my princess, my mermaid and my pearl
In my eyes she is more beautiful than any girl
^_^

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Simply amazing once again. Your love for your mother is so well depicted herein and I'm sure that she must be so proud to have a son like you.

    The last stanza was the heart of this poem and gave so much meaning and thought into how we treat our parents.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by andrea

    Omg i luuf it! I also like u have write about yoour mom I think is so nice that people remmber their parent when they write....they are good inspiration also. I almost cried at the end...im so sentimental and the poem is well done:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awwww, Adel!!!
    This is soooooooooo sweet! I wish my son would write me such a poem.
    You mom is really lucky to have such a sweet son.
    I love this poem, you did well.
    Thanks for commenting to my poem, called "craving for you". For your information: the affair ended after I made the third poem to my muse. Now I have to go look for a new one lol.......
    I will make you my muse for friendship poems, you like that, sweetie?

    Take care, my little bro

    xxsis

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Again 5/5
    I can really say that ur mom is really proud to have a son like u
    nand ya everybody should love n honor their mothers

    :)

    ~gIrL~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    A great write! beautifully done n it is true mum is the most beautful lady on ths earth.
    keep up the good work.

    God bless u

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