It's MY Life

by Independence Forever   Oct 5, 2007


Once was boring, takes on a new sharp edge
my life begins now, taken out of my wedge

ride the lightning, for me no mercy given
no cubicle for me, from now on I'm driven

I'm not going to live forever, the moment's mine
I'm putting the thrills upon my alabaster shrine

maybe I'll regret it tomorrow, but who cares
step back coward, for I'm the one who dares

never fear slip ups, embrace the mistakes made
the time's now, and I'm gonna enjoy the thrill raid

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. the flow was perfect, it
    was such a great piece. you
    have such a talent in writting,
    this was beautifully written.
    5/5

    nikki

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    The imagery you painted in this was beautiful...creates very vivid pictures for me.
    Flow was flawless throughout the entire piece and the message behind the written words is awesome..beautifully and elegantly written.

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