As The Shadows Dance.

by Teria   Oct 7, 2007


As The Shadows Dance.

Break the bond between the sun and moon.
Hold too dearly, clutched to the tune -
Of the ever dying lullaby sung within the night,
creating such emotions, that just feel right.

Dreaded and unmentioned, you stole away my heart.
Swept me off my feet, to tear my body and soul apart.

The most wondrous of dreams; elegance with beauty,
As the shadows dance, reflecting what's meant of me.

And, you can tear me down and break me
in a million different pieces, left unhappy.
But within my mind of a hearty soul,
I'll die alive, with perfection made whole.

So, try your best to break the bond
between the sun and moon,
there's no possible way, you could ever
get through me clutched to the tune.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. In all honesty, I didn't like this one to much.

    I don't know. I just felt that you could have put more emotion into this..to me, it felt like you were holding back a little.

    However, on the other hand, I did love the imagery that you portrayed, it created very beautiful pictures for me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    5/5 for the flawless imagery and use of metaphores. I like this one and it is very nice. Tc

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was absolutely perfect, it was flawless, the flow was amazing, and the piece was amazingly thought of, i loved it. 5/5

    nikki

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww. i love this poem! great job and thanks for the comment :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    WOW.
    Sweetie, this was perfect! So flawless, the flow was great throughout and the wording was beautiful.
    With love, Tara-Kay

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