Denial

by damont   Oct 16, 2007


Denied the reality he couldn't accept
the secret brought tears which made him weep
hidden in his heart and revealed through dreams
that make him freak
peace no longer allowed he couldn't speak
on the path of insanity
he must end this streak
or a face a consquence of a terrible false reality
haunted by only the things his eyes can see
to face it head on is the only answer or so it seems

I'm not quite finish yet so i will finish it later.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Although you are not quiet finished yet. i think it was a wonderful poem. good work on the beggining piece. i think if you add grammer into it you will have a greater effect though.

    -terra

  • 16 years ago

    by LuvstruckChild

    Good job, be sure to finish, okay? It's really great.

  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    This was good. it had an unclear topic, but in this case, that made the reader wonder, think. it was worded excellently and read well. great write.

    --TheGothicAlbino

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