Left Empty

by Elapsed   Oct 16, 2007


Drifting from conciseness,
Sweeping abyss consumes swiftly.

Lingering soul in gloomy coldness,
Vision of a future left empty.

Swinging forth from love to malice,
Dignity lost in a lack of courtesy.

Never knew someone to be so heartless,
Words left unspoken in cruelty.

Swinging forth from love to malice,
Dignity lost in a lack of courtesy.

Chances of redemption hopeless,
back to the days of being carefree.

Swinging forth from love to malice,
Dignity lost in a lack of courtesy.

Lingering soul in gloomy coldness,
Vision of a future left empty.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...I loved that one completely Sam, you really have a wonderful talent for writing and I hope you never stop ^_^ I'm so sorry that I've gotten behind in reading your work, I can see that I've missed a lot of wonderful reading ^_^ Cheer up, the darkness can't last forever and the sun always breaks through the clouds :)
    ~*Rhea*~

  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    Wow much deeper can you get in writing? love this poem...you are one talented poet.

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Geesh, I remember these thoughts. This poem speaks from my heart about two years ago. Things I went through and things that were going on. There is a very thin line between love and hate, although hate is such a strong word, nothing short of it. The pain we feel could be described as such.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    I am glad to see you finished one. Remeber it helps to vent your feelings . You have done a great job here. Ingrid is so right your frineds will stand strong beside you.
    Take care of yourself
    (((Hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sam,

    Don't let it get to ya. You still have your friends!
    I will never abandon you, know this to be true.
    I will be your friend forever!

    Chin up:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid