The Adrenalin Rush

by Dark Secrets   Oct 16, 2007


I love the feeling...
When I throw myself down
Bouncing right back
From the springy tied rope

I love the feeling...
When I jump from up above
Blowing on my face
Is the fierce windy sky

I love the feeling...
When challenging a raging beast
Being thrashed left and right
On the bulls rocky back

I love the feeling...
When climbing up high
Of being so huge
When all is so small

I love the feeling...
When I rush past the cars
Feeling the pressure
Of the extremely speedy ride

I love the feeling...
When I glide like the breezy wind
As I whiz past the scenes
On a blade of small wheels

I love the feeling...
When I'm thrown by the waves
Like a log in the raging waters
The waves toy I become

I love the feeling...
When I'm floating upon the moving waters
Then catch a rough wave
Like a hovering seagull I am

I love the feeling...
When I dive deep down
In the freezing cold
With the icy wonders

I love the feeling...
When I slide on a board
Spurting the snow
Off the hard mountain ground

I love the feeling...
The feeling of my heart jumping to my ribs
The feeling of being on a Hy
The feeling of the adrenalin pumping through my veins!

I done this one for an English assignment

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  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    This poem is really wonderful because it was written by a beautiful mind.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is catchy. I love how you made such an amazing imagery here. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Keep read more, one step at a time. Don't give up. You can do it. When I start writing, I wasn't good at all.

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura Lamarca

    Stanza 2 has an ABCB rhyme pattern that doesn't tie in with this piece. A poem is either rhymed or unrhymed, combining them both sometimes works if done with extreme care, but it this case it just didn't gel, not for me anyway. Other than that, this is a moderately good piece. A little work and a quick edit to tidy it up would only serve to improve this.