Places to cry

by Elapsed   Oct 18, 2007


Our journey is over and I don't know what to think,
You were my dream I thought had come true.

You've gone away and cos of you,
I'm running out of places to cry.

You've hurt my feeling and cos of you,
I've forgotten how to smile.

All that is left are my memories of you,
fun and laughter till the morning after.

You've hurt my feeling and cos of you,
I've forgotten how to smile.

Never to hear your sweet voice call my name,
to put me at ease as you had once done.

You've hurt my feeling and cos of you,
I've forgotten how to smile.

An image of you still etched in my mind,
a spectacular vision of you frozen in time.

You've hurt my feeling and cos of you,
I've forgotten how to smile.

You've gone away and cos of you,
I'm running out of places to cry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was wonderful and yet so very sad, it's one that I relate to quite well and am so sorry that your having to go through emotions like this =( I hope everything works out soon and remember, you're never alone because no matter what happens your friends are still here =) 5/5 On this poem =)

    Lots of hugs and hope your ok,
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very good write!!!
    Keep up the good work.

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    I can related to this poem so much... It speaks truth...LOVE HURTS SOMETIMES....

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    This really brought tears to my eyes. The emotions are so strong in this piece.

    An image of you still etched in my mind,
    a spectacular vision of you frozen in time.

    You've hurt my feeling and cos of you,
    I've forgotten how to smile.

    These lines reall touched me. I hope that smile of yours comes back to you real soon.
    Your in my thoughts and prayers.
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well Sam,

    You can cry on my shoulder all you want.
    Happy days will return, mark my words.
    It is time to look at the future now. No more sad poems by you anymore or I will come over and give you a good spanking!!!
    Chin up, mate!!:))))))

    Ingrid

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