Brick Walls.

by ALEX   Oct 22, 2007


Sailing away on an ocean of dreams,
Drowning in reasons to see and be seen.
And your hesitation is always a curse,
But dear, your actions tend to be much worse.
She's timeless, yet forever changed.
A pretty face; a mind, derranged.
We're never alone, but we like to pretend...
Our brick walls don't fall, but boy can they bend!

9/11/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    She's timeless, yet forever changed.
    A pretty face; a mind, derranged.
    AMAZING LINES.
    Great flow, easy to read and understand. very emotive. very well written.
    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You're very honest and direct throughout this poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    I like to take note on the beautiful flow and rythm this poem has...nicely done. it seems like you are a genius in short poems which usually are the ones with the most meaning. the last 2 lines are priceless and very sincere
    amazing job keep it up
    Take Care
    xHSx

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Very hmmm at first I didn't like it but the way you summed the whole thing up was very well done great job on a fantastic finish Plot121

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