Spiritual Sensations

by Angie   Oct 27, 2007


Spiritual Sensations

spiritual sensations
on this ghostly hallows eve
will really keep me busy
more than other times I receive

I'll hear their little whispers
some will even whine
wanting me to give a message
to those they left behind

I'll bring out the pendulum
for some they have no voice
watch it swing to and fro
and know they now rejoice

some will hang around
all throughout the night
while all the others
will simply take flight

I shall never tire
of these spirit greetings
I welcome them into my heart
and look forward to the next meeting

**Written for a group contest**

**Thank you Sunshine for the title**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I love this poem is excellent and very well written
    I love the choice or wording used throughout the poem to!
    5/5 Your a brilliant writter!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dang that's some really dark stuff. It's well written. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This was written very well. The rhyme scheme is good and the flow smooth and easy. There are some great images and meanings here.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A great poem, very well written 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    I loved this poem. It's written amazingly. Keep up the great job. 5/5