So I've Heard

by Sarah Ann   Oct 29, 2007


He tears me up, he breaks me down
A million pieces on the ground
He builds me up, makes me complete
He hurts and disassembles me
He lies awake, and lies for fun
He puts me down, leaves me undone
He wants me badly; so I've heard...
I fall for every single word

[Just a small vent because I haven't been on here in forever and I don't want my account to become inactive.]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I do like this. But don't let it be your lastttt. I know how you feel about the not being able to write. Lol. I'm like that too at the moment.
    Anyways, i loved this. 5/5.

    ` Liz =]]
    Ily!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I do like this. But don't let it be your lastttt. I know how you feel about the not being able to write. Lol. I'm like that too at the moment.
    Anyways, i loved this. 5/5.

    ` Liz =]]
    Ily!

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    This was a really good vent. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is quite powerful, I really like it. Whole poem is filled with collided emotions which leaved strong impression on me.
    Effective, from the beginning to the end.
    Great job!