What would I do without you?

by Shinobi   Oct 31, 2007


Holding hands, with your beaming smile
We're walking down the blossom valley line
Now I see that our friendship is worthwhile
More than anything, I wish you were mine

Enjoying the softness of your sound
I bow before your breath taking song
You're the one who makes my world go round
I'm so happy we finally get along

The deep feeling from your eyes
Is something I had never knew
My feelings for you are on the rise
With every day that passes through

Hugging your such soft fragile body
With passion I never experienced before
Nobody knows the feeling, nobody
With that warm hug, my life you restore

Apart from you, my marvelous soul
I am no longer the same
I can feel sharp pain in my heart
When far and hearing your name

Our relationship is one big sensation
I know I can never be blue
I keep asking the same question
What would I do without you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is so cute. I can relate to this.. where would we be without the ones we love..? amazing job on this.. the only issue i had was:

    We're walking down the blossom Vally line

    did you mean valley? .. why is it capitalized?

    other than that it was great

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem even though I found some of the lines to be a little predictable because I could know which rhyme was coming before I read it. Simple with alot of emotion written in great depth. Well done I loved this poem alot. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Tons of emotion and passion that i respect very much, don't see that very often expressed in such a well manner, very well done...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    The deep feeling from your eyes
    Is something I had never knew
    My feelings for you are on the rise
    With every day that passes through

    i loved that stanza, you wrote this poem so wonderfully and beautifully! i love it. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Aww.. i love it. love the feeling u portay in this. Truly had to have been written from the heart. It was a wonderful read! keep it up! :o]

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