Open the Gate

by Nix   Nov 3, 2007


We''ll meet the gallows
under torrid sky,
we'll encounter monsters
which are reflections of our actions, maybe;
but attraction to the depths of volcano
and charisma of the waters in which we swim
are enough to charm the soul,
to connect the lights of outer world
in the frame of abstract magician's dimensions.

Completely lost, we dance
through the labyrinth, in the garden of music;
on the brink of the worlds we kneel,
kissing beautiful goddess, we dream.
Patterns on skin guide us,
we sell our souls to the Devil
just to, through the bars
stare in wonders sculptured by imagination.
We steal emeralds from nymph's neck.

The universe is embodied,
warrant announced;
it's certain- we'll meet the gallows,
under torrid sky;
yet, we don't care-
we'll watch the fire
and live through every flame,
and avidly we drink from the store of inspiration,
hugging red-eyed creatures, we dream.

Please, open the gate
for the last time,
I want to fly through the expanses of unknown;
we hide sanity somewhere where we won't look,
and again, celebrate coming home,
absorb energy of the words
which she restlessly repeated;
phantoms are in our eyes, stunningly divine...
... so alluring is walking above the clouds,
while we throw away the torches...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Great poem. A lot of good imagery. Awesome job, once again. And thank you for all the comments. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    -We''ll meet the gallows
    under torrid sky,
    we'll encounter monsters
    which are reflections of our actions, maybe;
    but attraction to the depths of volcano
    and charisma of the waters in which we swim
    are enough to charm the soul,
    to connect the lights of outer world
    in the frame of abstract magician's dimensions.-
    ^^
    This is my favorite part of the poem, it is excellently written, with magical imagery and strong, clear message. Whole picture that you portrayed here is completely stunning.

    The second stanza is also great, except the line -We steal emeralds from nymph's neck.
    it somehow ruins whole flawless flow of that part for me.
    The third stanza is excellent, the repetition in it from the first stanza is quite effective and captivating, except the last two lines which disconnect sense of the whole part of the poem for me.
    The last stanza has its ups and downs, but the two ending lines are quite powerful and alluring.
    All in all, good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really loved this poem by you. The description used created the most vivid iamgery into my mind which was etched together nicely by your great word choice. This was a flawless piece. Overall I defnitly did love it a 5/5 from me as always. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    Wow! This is more than amazing how you come up with this beautiful images that you created. The decription is flawless and intoxicating..To write such captivating words and intense depths of your imagery is amazing...

    through the labyrinth, in the garden of music
    on the brink of the worlds we kneel

    5/5 from me..

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow very descriptive as usual and keep up the great work if you have time could you read my latest poem? 5/5

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