The Madness

by Joshua Grider   Nov 11, 2007


I feel the madness
crowding my mind.

a temper i feel
but hope not to find.

i cannot contain it
it cannot be stopped
for my mind will not let me
be what not forgot......

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow. This was perfect.
    Your I's need capitalized.
    But, other than that I'm afraid you've done quite a wonderful job.

    Amazing,actually.
    The flow is perfect. Actually, flawless.
    As is the word choice and emotion.
    Wonderful, Joshua.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    SHort, sweet and to the point 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Ilike how it sounds ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    I liked this one not everyone will understand it but i did and that makes it great.

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