Winter Wishes

by debbylyn   Nov 15, 2007


Once upon a love gone by
I crossed my heart and now I die
Tears may fall before I wake
Cleave my heart on sorrow's lake

Stains of past to mar the ground
Emptiness devoid of sound
Frozen heart no longer feels
Numbness has become so real

Blanketed by icy pearls
Adorned and crowned by fetal curls
Rosebud remnants seal the pain
Loneliness the last remains

Winter beauty steals the night
Blows her gale with swift delight
Drifted in a gentle shroud
Peaks of nothing 'neath a cloud

Pristine lake cast so serene
Snowfall covers all obscene
Breaths of love, a final plea
Awake my love and follow me

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  • 18 years ago

    by twilightfan

    OMG that was amazing!!!!
    last stanza was my fav all i have to say is magnifasent!!!!! 1000/1000

  • 18 years ago

    by Yu Lee

    I loved the rhyme
    and the poem had so many great words to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by DannieDemon

    ....this is one of the best peices of writing if read. good job.
    ...........7/5.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Deep and sad. Once again the flow is flawless. The word choice is excellent. The last 2 stanzas are my favorite and wrap this piece up well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Barry

    Sad the words you write.......your talent seems to have no limit........so beautiful the scene......but within it a dream

    cos you know its not true.....
    simply because......?
    love is......love is you

    beautifullly written poem

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