by lisabrighteyes Nov 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Laying down |
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This is good... i like it |
by Marc Ortiz
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Well it was a good poem. but I think it would be better if you used punctuation in this poem. :) |
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Wow, it's a great poem and so deep that i can feel the emotion...5/5 |
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Great poem love the reptition of deep deep dreamless sleep. Has a nice ring to it. |