I miss

by crystaljean88   Nov 19, 2007


I miss your touch,
With your loving caress.
I miss your love,
When I laid against your chest.

I miss your smile.
As we laughed all night.
I miss your eyes,
With them sparkling bright.

I miss our fights,
After all the tears.
I miss our laughs,
Inside jokes over the years.

Put it together,
And you will see.
I miss you,
Baby, were meant to be.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    And yet, another one of your wonderful poems. It's a really beautiful poem. I really love the passion in this. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was another sweet and simple one. I like how you can create a heartfelt poem with simple and basic rhyme and it doesn't seem boring or plain. The last line i'm not really sure about it. I think it may flow a bit better if you altered it just a tiny touch to "Baby, you were ment for me" or something along them lines but that's just my personal opinion nothing big that trashes your poetry. Overall a good flowing piece which you poured your heart out into. Well done. Keep up the good work. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow! this is amazing<33
    i cant pick out a fav in this one. it was all so good and it flowed perfectly.
    keep it coming.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I liked it! The flow was great and the style was simple and sweet. The emotions you described were real and felt as if they were from your heart.

    "Baby, were meant to be. "
    ^it's "we're"

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow i just love it.....5/5

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