Dance Like You Have Nothing To Fight For

by NyellMoonlight   Nov 25, 2007


Shimmering mixtures of cashmere's pureness
and silver forged with sharpened obsessions
embrace my soul under the scarlet veils of sunsets
bringing lively exotic birds to form a choir...

Dance like you have nothing to fight for,
bare-foot over the ashes of burned frustrations,
over wild flowers that enwrap around your ankles
while the fireworks across the sky paint beautiful tunes.

Feathery clouds leak healing venoms, cascade
between the stars molded in the most magical performances;
once upon a time our hands met, fingers entwined
and now we're living through that frozen moment.

Dance like you have nothing to fight for
feast with the wine made of colorful rainbow's particles
and smile, smile in the honor of our fastened heartbeats
relinquishing pain and lonesome, shattered fears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow. Your work never ceases to amaze me. Each one I read from you is better than the last because you keep improving which is amazing. It goes without saying that your word choice was superb and the way you fit words together into phrases is flawless. I don't know much else to say because you work is so hard to critque because there is never anything wrong with it. I couldnt find a fave line because it all just blew me away. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Basically its the verbs and adjectives that make it so lovely. Its kinda deep, but if you read it slow you can understand what its about. It has a slower pave, which is fine. Its very well written and i like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful
    ...again the words...flawless
    I don't know where you get your vocab from
    ...but it's just amazing
    your flow was good as well
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Bravo!!!
    The power of this piece is amazingly portrayed. It's deep core is filled with so breath-taking emotions and the way that you wrote it is just outstanding. I don't want to repeat myself but mixed imagery and expressed emotions left fascinated impression on me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Red CSIII

    This is the third poem I've read by you, and I've become entranced ^_^
    Thank you, and I'll keep close by *favorites*

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