Incubus Dreams

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 28, 2007


Incubus Dreams

These nightmares do not let me sleep,
All I can think of is fear.
Fear of dying while I'm dreaming,
Nobody knowing the cause of it.

In the dream I see a monster,
So ugly that it scares me.
It tells me it's my time to die
And tries to kill me.

But I do not let myself die,
Since I wake myself up.
I try to wonder what the dream means,
But nothing comes to mind.
No problems of mine relate to this.

I guess they're just nightmares,
Like everyone else have.
Then I do not feel anymore fear,
Because I realize there's nothing to worry about.

*Cindy Lopez*
*Nov. 28, 2007*

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    U USUALLY DON'T WRITE THESE KIND OF POEM, BUT IT'S A GOOD ONE.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    The title drew me in, I like the first 2 stanzas, but it falls apart a bit in the last two. It was a good effort and I think it has a lot of potential, it just needs a little work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I would rework this one, It has great potenchel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I again really like the theme...maybe next time really get into it and describe your dreams. but I also really like the flow...there were some repeated words that stuck out a lot like me...but oh well
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I liked this poem alot. the flow was perfect and u choed excellent words to go along with it.
    the story line was really good to. my fav stanza was

    In the dream I see a monster,
    So ugly that it scares me.
    It tells me it's my time to die
    And tries to kill me

    that stanza is i think what made the poem come to life. rlly good poem

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