Those Eyes (title contest)

by Natasha   Dec 2, 2007


Those eyes,

Silent cries pierce the night,
Total darkness enlights the sight.
Something changed in dark of day,
the light of night went away.

He left his soul where it ends,
somewhere cold, there are no friends.
He saw himself in the mirrors shards,
he realized, death had dealt it's cards.

He cries at night, no listening ear,
Never a soul that shared his fear.
of seeing his eyes, the dark of day,
Praying that they would go away.

Crimson red glows inside,
Never leaves, oh yes, he's tried.
He tried to cut the pain away,
But he knew, it would not stray.

So his fear of these drowning eyes,
Led him to the place, where he now lies,
afraid of winning a losing game,
his dying eyes remained the same.

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  • 13 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    "Crimson red glows inside,
    Never leaves, o yes, he's tried.
    He tried to cut the pain away,
    But he knew, it would not stray.

    So his fear of these drowning eyes,
    Led him to the place, where he now lies,
    afraid of winning a loosing game,
    his dying eyes remained the same."

    Okay, the o needs to be oh.
    And loosing needs to be losing. Then it's flawless, babe.
    Take care.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Solus

    This is pure gold.....so strong and deep. Hmm.....I wonder.....