A poem for you (james)

by Krysten   Dec 18, 2007


You've broken down the walls
You've wiped away the tears
Breaking though my defences
That have been up for years

You've slowly but shurly
made you way in to my heart
And now that i have you
I cant picture us apart

With out any warning
You've swept me away
Just being there for me
Day after day

There was no stopping my heart
For you have it enthralled
No way to contol it
No chance at all

What can i say
Except "I love you"
You've won my heart over
What else can i do

So as i lay me down to sleep each night
Wishing you were here with me
Safe within your arms
Is the only place I'd rather be

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  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Another good piece. Fanstatic flow of words and good usage of rhyme. Very good job
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    Hey its a cute poem,, its almost like a song.. but i would have liked to know more... as in the poem should have been a little longer on its description.. but its really sweet ,, am giving it a five.. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow.. this is a very good poem. i loved it.. u have 1 miss spelling...

    You've slowly but shurly
    made you way in to my heart
    And now that i have you
    I cant picture us apart

    you needs to b your.. but overall its a great poem. great job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwz i liike it....i love the flow and its very well written....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wonderful! this was really sweet and very sincere! i can fell how u express ur emotions here.. i can truly relate this lines

    What can i say
    Except "I love you"
    You've won my heart over
    What else can i do

    how sweet yah... love the feelings when someone will tell me those words...

    great imagery and thoughts.. 5/5

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