Very pretty!

I like it...the syle is a little different then what im used to but all in a all a very good poem. i can certinly relate....as i am in love myself. but yes good job 5/5

Wow that was amazing....id use big words in mi poems but im not that smart lmao...but this was really good keep up the good work....& thanks for the comment on mi poem....
5/5

-SAM

Cute poem. :]

i feel this way about someone too.
only. .they moved away last year. :[
but i manage. .

5/5. :]

Aww this poem was very sweet
u really a get a picture about how u feel about this person
good job
5/5

This poem was written very well. good job!!!!

Well i would say that the style of writing could do with a little improvement.. its like uve mixed two styles together... one sounds somewhat like rap ...the other reads like a song.. although its over all a well written piece..it would be better if u made the arrangement a little more cohesive

This was a very lovely piece. It portrayed the message beautifully and flowed well..

An enjoyable read.
well done,
keep it up.
--Elly.

Awwwz i rele liike it...its cute!!!! and i can relate to it too!!! lol 5/5

This reminds me of myself...Good Job! 5/5

Ohh ...great imagery and emotions! the feelings u had expressed and those word are truly fantastic! so sweet piece and it was so true 5/5

I loved it! The way you described what he has that makes you happy just made me smile because I could relate 100% The style was different and I enjoyed it a lot. Well done, I was interested from beginning to end. *5/5*

This was so sweet, so amazing. I loved how it was written, and I loved the message behind it. This poem was simply beautiful! The emotions that you portrayed were simply amazing! Keep up the awesome work!

"Your unmindful flirtation
Your hypnotizing eyes"
Easily my favorite lines! It reminds me of the day i met my boyfriend! He was so flirty and his eyes are an amazing shade of green...this part i can really relate to.

Its a really good poem. the flow was good and word chosen where really powerful and added another element to the poem
xx
Taegan Emily

I don't even know where to begin with this poem. It just hit the spot for me, bought tears to my eyes. I wish that I could express that passion for the person that I'm in love with.

Breathless piece dedicated to a loved one....You write from your heart which is good...Keep up the good work..

A wonderful detailed celebration of your love.
The repetetive statements with its explaination was a unique way to express such a wonderful emotion!!

Well done 5/5

Michael

Great poem!
i like the repition and all of the great decriptive words you used :)!
5/5 deffinately :)

Aww, thats too cute :]
I like it! It's different [in a good way]

5/5

I did a extra one for u juss becuz i like how u write. this one is no different from the others i read...5/5*.