Cheated

by crystaljean88   Dec 23, 2007


It won't go away,
I don't know why.
Late at night,
I can only cry.

Missing you,
Kills me slowly.
Come back to me.
I'm so lonely.

Kisses so deep,
And love so true.
I would do anything,
To come back to you.

Your sexy voice,
Touches me so.
holding you tight.
Why did you go?

We had it all.
But I messed up.
If only I hadn't cheated,
We wouldn't of broke up.

to my ex boifriend brent.. im so sorry!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The short lines worked for me here. It held some emotion and flowed nicely. Nothing seemed forced. I loved the imagery and how I could relate with the emotions you described. Not the cheating part but the way he makes you. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Well I really loved it. That suchs that you cheated, but everything happens for a reason right? Well, I loved it though! The emotion in this was deep. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    :[ can relate to this one too. i lost my ex to cheating. I also didn't realise how much he meant to me. Well written and very emotive
    Taegan Emily
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Awww....this poem is sweet, and sad at the same time

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    Lol my this i can relate to also but in a dif way....i read it from my exs point of very b/c he wants me back so bad. lol back i cant take him back (cheated on me with my sister) but yeah anyways the poem was really good short sweet and to the point. i liked it

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