Yours, Untitled Poem.

by abracadabra   Dec 24, 2007


At last, you find a
new hair colour, or a husband.
You plant a flag
on a hill, or a bed in a bedroom,
words in a poem.

You look back and think
"I have done it at last!"
under your wide patch of blue.
Your fingers touch, and you behold.
"I have found you. I have you."

This, right here, is where
the paint chips off the wall,
the land floods,
language loses its meaning, and you,
you are left gasping for air
as a rustle slips politely from your embrace.

This is where they stand
wavering before your little eyes.
"No. You are mistaken."
They murmur, smiling slowly.
"Visitor, you know
it was always the opposite."

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  • 14 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    Wow. This was amazing. .you portrayed the change in life so well. Very nice.

  • 15 years ago

    by Supertramp

    Perceptive provocative and a splash of bloody good

  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    An interesting take (as always) on the truth and reality of the impermanence in all things. Your poem reminded me of a line from a song which reads 'hold on to nothing and it won't let you down'. Very perceptive and thought provoking.
    Happy New Year.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Ah,...Change.....The only constant....'-)

    Really good poem, dear....