And It's Time To Let Go

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Dec 26, 2007


I would tell you to let go.
but i don't wanna be a hypocrite.
i know that it's hard.
so your friends help you deal with it.

why do you hold on to someone
who treated you so bad.
the one you argued with so much.
and that got you so d a m n mad.

not that she even cared.
but she somehow blinded you.
her selfishness you could not see.
and the bitterness she put you through.

she put tears to your face.
and an ache to your head.
and yet you forgave her every time.
no matter what she'd said.

the accusations that you made.
we both know that they were true.
so why'd have you fight so hard.
to try and hide the truth.

sometimes i pity you.
to have fallen so deep.
to the point where you don't accept.
as you let the pain seep.

I've listened to your arguments.
I've heard all the lies.
why do you put up with her.
when she's brought tears to your eyes.

i once envied your relationship.
for i wanted someone to be so close.
someone i could love to love me back.
i envied you the most.

your life is nothing what i thought.
but you're still so much better than me.
you don't understand a thing about me.
but still, sometimes i wish that you could see.

you're cockiness and incompetence annoys me.
your portrayal of me couldn't be more wrong.
i know you think I'm stupid and perhaps. .worthless.
but i know how to come out standing strong.

don't judge me because you don't know me.
i have enough of those stupid haters.
i don't need you to be part of that group.
i don't need another traitor.

i guess this is the end.
cuz I've got nothing left to say.
and I'll give you my goodbye.
on your graduation day. .

this poem is about my brother and his [ex]girlfriend.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Really? ohh.. that was great coz u had really portrayed well about their story! hmm u had a great imagery coz the structures seems great! keep on writing all what u feel and kepp it up

    well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Liked the way you described the false relationship your brother had. Oh, women can be so seductive sometimes... The choosing of words and flow were great here as well, a very true peice of work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Dear Miss Wilted,
    It's hard to watch a good friend be hurt by something, by anything. You want to stop it, you want to help. The fact that sometimes all you can do is sit back and watch is one of the truest tortures in the world. I needed to read this poem tonight, because i've been enduring this exact brand of torture, and somehow having your words out in the world so that you and I, and whoever else reads them can know, even in part, what this feels like. Well, it makes that pain a little less bearable. And for that, I am in your debt.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow im speechlesss!!!! very good! and i can relate to it 100% on the feelings!!! i think a title for it could be......its hard to let go....sumthen liik ehtat !!!!

  • Wow, this was absolutely sad. I loved it though. It reminded me of a situation I'm currently on. You did a great job at explaining it, and good choice of words. Nice poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

More Poems By FlawlesslyTarnished