8 Years Later

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Jan 3, 2008


Everyday I think about you
Never does it fail
But tomorrow will be hard
As I have to lean against the rail

Your strawberry blond hair
Cascaded in light curls down your back
While your beautiful hazel eyes
Would keep me on the right track

I miss your smile
So comforting and warm
I miss the laugh
You would always form

I will hold on tight
To everything I can
Because once in the wrong direction
Had I ran

Take my hand in yours
Lead me down the right track
Guide me towards the future
Be the mother I sadly lack

Find away to tell me your stories
Stay up late one night
Mother and daughter together
Because none of this is right

You should be here real and true
So I can here your voice
But you decided to really hurt me
When you made that damn choice

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  • 17 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm... the flow was a little off for me, but i loved the imageryat the beginning... not one of your best but still good i give it a 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    So sad
    thnx a ton for letting me read your poems
    and
    thnx many more for the great comments
    because
    you didn't have to do 4
    but
    you did
    so
    thank you
    5/5
    (~:Sam Mayo:~)

  • 17 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    I think this one was great, I wasnt a fan of the flow, but thats just a personal opinion. I love that the emotions where really strong and expressed so beautifully with words.

    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow!!
    very powerful poem!!
    keep up the great work!!
    5/5

    <3 i love you silly

  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Beautiful poem.
    the flow was flawless.
    and you portrayed the emotion very well.
    i've been through the same thing.
    and it's kinda sad to say. it's been 10 years for me.
    i just can't seem to let go. ."/

    great write. 5/5.

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