Way of life

This poem is really emotive. i really enjoyed that.

This poem is really powerful.. you say this poem isn't the best but that doesn't matter... as long as you write and let your feelings out.. that's all that matters... great job!

My life isn't perfect,
Its far worse than you know.
You think I tell it all,
But many things I don't show.

I really enjoyed that stanza.. people think they know everything about us but they don't have a clue of how someone's life really is. Excellent job!... keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

I love the way you write your poems, you do a very good job with them even if you don't mean them to be perfect. Great job with it! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Awe. sad poem. but good.
i been through this kinda thing.
and it always sucks to feel like this.

"Living life is never easy,
But it shouldn't be this hard.
Now having thoughts of suicide,
Never should I let down my guard."

those were my favorite lines! :] 5/5.

Wow, really deep and emotional. i really like it.
but please cheer up :]
Taegan Emily
xx