The day we met

by Dark Secrets   Jan 17, 2008


The day I first saw you
The hour our eyes met
That summer the clouds were gone
And the suns rays wore their brightest light

That second I felt connected
By a thread of delicate love
Wound by cupids arrow
Joining us by the heart

Deeper and deeper I sank
To the bowels of your soul
I saw your deepest darkest dreams
And discovered your utmost desires

You cast a spell into my unconscious mind
It made me act irrationally
And give up to this unexpected feeling
That gaze arose inside me

I can't eat or drink or function
My talent has dissolved
All I see is you, Your voice is in my head
And your perfume blocks other smells

I'm better off asleep
Than dreaming while awake
With nothing more than one wish
To be with you again!

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, this poem is really emotional.
    5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww, such a sweet love poem! Yes..it does feel sooo good to be in love! You have captured that feeling really well!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow, this is fabulous!!.. I love the ending.. And i enjoy reading your work!!.. Keep it ups!!..

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    I really like this peom!
    So sweet and touching.
    The end is great.
    Enjoyed reading it!
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, this very awesome poem, so much love and desires.
    "I'm better off asleep
    Than dreaming while awake
    With nothing more than one wish
    To be with you again!"
    i liked this part very much...its fantastic

Read All Comments (9)

More Poems By Dark Secrets