Suicide's Not A Sin

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Jan 18, 2008


Her eyes are deep
But no feelings show
She's keeping a secret
That nobody knows

Beneath her sleeves
Beneath her heart
She has slowly
Torn herself apart

Arms scared by razors
Heart scared by past
She keeps this secret hidden
Praying it'll last

Wearing a forged smile
Laughing like nothings wrong
Beneath a steel razor blade
Is where her arms belong

Thoughts spin in her head
Tearing up her heart
It won’t be very long
Until she'll tear herself apart

She counted down the days
Until it'll finally came
It was time to end it all
This stupid little game

So in her room alone
Blaring Three Days Grace
She finally loses control
What a big disgrace

Blood drained and broken
Wrists torn apart
CD playing over
Her hand on her heart

Blaring Three Days Grace
She waits for it to end
Murder's against the law
But suicide's not a sin

Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow,ur poems are great

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Truly amazing ^^ the person above said it all. it flows really well, great job, wish i could write like you lol :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Another great piece. and the emotion was
    very intense, i love it. a very attention
    grabbing poem, for me, from start to finish.
    :] and your choice was words were outstanding.
    a truly amazing write! :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Intense poem, filled with amount of greatly expressed emotions from the beginning to the end.
    Very touching poem, filled with tones of deep darkness and sadness.
    You should correct copy/ paste error in the fifth stanza.
    All in all, greatly done. The flow is also good from the beginning to the end.
    Powerful piece.
    Keep writing!

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