Endless loss

by Boy   Jan 18, 2008


Another night came with old sorrows;
Belongings to my one sided love;
Bringing thousand of emotions,
Another tear flew down.

Another morning with lonely silence;
Giving darkness to my faded memories;
Closing all the doors toward her,
Another hope tired now.

Another evening came with old scene;
Bringing her face in front of me;
Informing about my dark tomorrow,
Another fear embraced me.

Another love is dying soon;
Keeping all its pains;
Leaving the unsaid words,
Another life destroyed in love.

written by: hassan kirmani
time: 11:33 pm

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Another night cOMES with old sorrows;
    Belonging to my one sided love;
    Bringing thousandS of emotions,
    Another tear fALLS down.

    Another morning with A lonely silence;
    Giving THE darkness to my faded memories;
    Closing all the doors towardS her,
    Another hope tired IS now.

    Another evening came with AN old scene;
    Bringing her face in front of me;
    Informing about my dark tomorrow,
    Another fear embraced me.

    Another love is dying soon;
    Keeping all its pains;
    Leaving MORE unsaid words,
    Another life destroyed in love

    AGAIN IT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM. X

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    What I felt in this poem is what I feel in my real life..How the shadows are growing on the wall and how his face appear on the window on the rainy day..

    I wish I could express my feelings as beautiful as you can, but because I can not, the best thing to do is enjoy your work. Thanks for this poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Another great poem that is so wonderful! I really like the title, it fits the poem perfectly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is a very touching poem, so much pain portrayed here...

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    This was a very nice poem. I found it filled with emotions and the flow was very nice. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5*