Over and Over Again

Luv it.. its very sad, it describe what every gril does basiclly.. wish it was longer though.

So sad
the repitition of this "over and over again" in the end of each stanza shows how tired you are of this eternal "over and over again's" and wholly it adds the needed sad and tired and disappointed intonation, and leaves a feeling of some kind of unfinishness of this story and here it's great (i mean it's a great poetic thing, not a great feeling of course :) )

the rhythm is very clear and kinda simple but that makes it even more emotional. i always think that such simple rhythm makes a poem very sincere, like perhaps words of a child, it made me feel these feelings, especially through details and i realized that's much more than details because they repeat "over and over again" and gather, and it's painful.

this poem wasn't exceptional but it was so heart-felt! i don't know what touched me the most in it; probably the emotions here and how you express them in a kinda continent way, i mean not screaming "I suffer! My heart is broken! I feel soooo bad" but putting your feelings in laconic phrases that tell much more than these screams.

5/5

This poem is touching. I could feel the sad emotions all the way through. The repetance of the last line made the main idea even stronger. The flow and rhyming were great. A piece many can relate to, 5/5

I like this poem! Its not my favorite but I like how you repeated "Over and Over again" the flow seemed alittle rocky to me

This poem speaks the truth.. there r some ppl in relationships that always takes the blame.. again.. my bestfrnd can relate to this... for some reason.. you guys hav the same troubles that you've been through.. great poem! =]