Better place for you and I

by Shinobi   Jan 24, 2008


Walking down the sacred pathway
In an unholy land
Hoping that maybe someday
I'll find a way to mend

Watching all those vicious creatures
Killing each other constantly
Now I feel something growing
Deep inside of me

When angels fall, from the sky
I'll hold you up, close by
Please take my hand, and together let's fly
To a better place, for you and I

Heaven awaits for the unworthy
Saints and heroes sent to hell
Demon's magic filled with tempting beauty
Which all my life I try to repel

Now I found you, my long lost saint
My beautiful fallen angel from the sky
Your powers overwhelm me
Now take my hand, and together let's fly

When angels fall, from the sky
I'll hold you up, close by
So take my hand, and together let's fly
To a better place, for you and I

This is a poem dedicated to Melanie, a new German girl I met. Melanie - Ich liebe dich! :]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this one. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was a very sweet poem. I loved it completely. You are an amazing writer! Keep up the amazing work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Huh... That's called poem... I like it...

  • Aw this is such a cute poem. It has so much feeling in this. It seems like you really care about this girl. I love the way you explained it. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    A romantic poem deserving to be written for your love.. everything is beautiful.. emotions are clearly spoken into words... =]