My butterfly

Very complicated I think and I liked the read. It proves how fragile the vessel is of a lovers heart. It spills itself out willingly upon the page and makes for a good bundle of emotions that made the momment of reading it a joy. Keep up the good writes

This is so sweet and beautiful. i can tell you truly and deeply care for this person. wow, keep up the amazing work. flow was great too. 5/5

Fly my butterfly,
Fly very high.
Don't be afraid
And don't be shy.
Spread your wings,
Go toward the sky.
Shine the whole universe,
Color it with your dye.
The world has to see
With its own eyes.
That our love is strong,
Our love isn't a lie.

I love this stanza, this piece is so original and new... great poem

This is one of my favourites

This is so very sweet! Whose is this person? they must be great. Continue writing, your great at it.

XxXKristie MarieXxX